an angel without wings . . .
flew by my heart,
she won't kiss. . .
neither would love,
for love was forbidden,
it was a sin. . .
which i had committed. . .
and which she wanted to;
an angel without wings. . .
flew by my heart,
the world gave me pain. . .
but she made me love the pain,
she wouldn't let my heart stop. . .
she wouldn't let me die;
but this cruel world wouldn't let her. . .
wouldn't let me. . .
love my angel without wings,
for i was unaware that she wasn't made for love. . .
for no one told me god blessed her with endless pain. . .
and alas!
they won't even let me see her cry. . .
for i was the sinner . . .
and she was forbidden;
years later i saw her. . .
not a smile. . .
not a cry. . .
not even a word. . .
she lay silent. . .
six feet under. . .
in peace. . .
she was no more an angel without wings. . .
no more. . .
24 comments:
The first few lines reminded me of 'Robin' in that sitcom - How I met Your Mother !!
woahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
amazing... fantabulous.. i dunno wadda say
hmm this sorta has be lil confused. hmm, i thought the 1st 2 stanzas were contradictory to the 3rd.. hmm... do lemme know :)
effective endin nyway :)
great post.
Man.. if thats an honest product of urs... lemme tell u that its AWESOME.
it reminded me few lines of D poetry dat i used to struggle OVER during my 10th. hehe.. again after a loon time... its u again.
N alas.. d concluding part is sad. I wish if dat weren't true.
GR88 post budy... not an easy one.
wow.. after such a lovely song.. now comes this poetry.. Wayy to go Maddy .. :)
Touching one!!!!
churn out more!!!
its pretty a conceit...
contradctry para's ...m i right?
well, if it is so, guess that whats add to the meaning of the beautiful lyrics...
@haukna matata
well though i dont know much abt that sitcom but guess u r right...
@harini
thanx yaar...:)
@monica
well actually when i wrote i didn't plan to make them contradictory...
they might be..
but i just wrote as the words flew through my heart!!!
but the essence of the poem is clear i guess...
if not plz do let me know!!
@wizard
thanx..
@karthik
thanx dude!!
i am honored that u laid ur foot into my blog!!
he he..
well i take the pride then!!!
thanx dude...
@rohit
a long way to go dude..a long way..
yeah..
but certainly not as good as u r at these things!!
@zahid
thanx dude..
@neha
well though the para's seem to be contradictory i never planned them to be..
i just wrote them and they jus got by themselves..
hope u got the essence ..
wat i was trying to say ...
thanx for visitng my blog!!:)
hey very lovely poem here dost. can v be regulars at each others blog... ! do check out my blog and feed up my blog so tht v can be regular at each others blogs.
hi
can you tell me which song is it, the one that plays on your page?
reply me here - sharma_deep85@yahoo.co.in
i read your blogs
few are really awesome
in fact i can relate to the one where you got late for your exam; once i was called by my friend from examination hall to reach there. i was under the impression that exam was still an hour away.
an angels without wings....and without life....
better find another one....
coz even if u frown and cry and worry....u r only delaying wat u will do eventually....
omg! thats is sad bt wonderfully written!
really good
peace & love
Jeevy
beautiful!!
could actually feel the pain...
nicely written :)
@cold and silent
yeah...i knw ...u r right...
but maybe penning down thoughts isnt that bad...right??
@jeevy
thanx dude...
@pri
u have a wonderful blog...
i jus love ur posts..
and thanx for visiting mine...
awesome!
thanx kartika...:)
excellent poetry...impressive...truly pain gives a pleasure of different kind but u cant escape it...
thanx raul.....
thanks *blush*
have changed my template...had been intending to change it in a while and u suggesting it too added to the effect...:D
hope this one's better than the last (though have to choose from blogger only wch gives a very limited range)
anyways thats all it has for the technologically challenged ones like me :(
waiting to read ur next post...
seeya around!:)
"for i was unaware that she wasn't made for love. . .
for no one told me god blessed her with endless pain. . ."
beautiful but oh so grim. I guess I am a romantic, believing that everyone is capable of love - sometimes you have to dig deep - it's there, you just have to uncover it.
thats really wonderful!!!!
dude...im telling you
NOBODY is worth that kinda stuff. U put lots of feelings and stuff in there..but i don't think u need to dwell over her too much. If she didnt like u..its her loss. hoes come and go...u don't hafta dig ur heart out for all of em.
but those are some pretty good lines. I hate to admit it, but i think if being in love can produce that kinda stuff....its GOT to be more than hormones.
rawk on man...
cheers!
@pri
pretty gud pri..
thanx..
@send me an angel
i wish..hw i jsut wish!!
@keerti
thanx
@upecmustang
well u r rite dude..
i got to move on..i am trying to..
and yeah it takes much more than harmones.believe me!!
thanx for dropping by
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